All of this along with the xianxia trappings of cultivation and conflict reminds me of the author I Eat Tomatoes. The worst part? Chpt75 [Forester's Constitution - Proficiency: Early. Other than that, the story is a pretty basic New World/Ghosthound style deal. Various names show up only to be forgotten not even a chapter after. Each new arc introduces many characters that are, in the moment, interesting but rarely matter going forward. It definitely feels like TheFirstDefier started out with an interesting premise and just kept writing from there. With over 100 chapters now the story is different then when I reviewed in the beginning. So is he overpowered? Start by marking “Defiance of the Fall” as Want to Read: Error rating book. If you're gonna be paranoid about something, it doesn't make sense to be half-paranoid about it. He was pretty sure they were fake, but he didn’t want to keep them in the camp on the off-chance their function was tracking their location."
Yes he got injured in the fight, but that didn't seem to stop him from chasing the ranger girl or going blow for blow against a heavy sword. The whole planet was introduced to the so-called multi-verse by an unfeeling System or God. Second of all, when the hell did he learn to throw knives? The author basically hands the protagonist everything he needs on a silver platter like in most stories like these, what he has not done however is give him anything more than what he needs, he's given him exactly the bare minimum and nothing more and I like that. the ratings of A, B, C, D, E and F essentially, and of course the levels). However, this novel will, and has to, be a long-running series if the Author wish to keep their current story pace. Apocolptic-litrpg where the MC is off on his own trying to survive in this new dark and gritty world. Everyone except for the protagonist of course, he doesn't get a tutorial (lol). Yes, but also no. There've been hints at a larger story surrounding Zac and his sister and their place in the universe, but 300 chapters in its still too early to say. Why does it specifically have to be the hands that can draw in the energy? He sometimes goes down darker paths … This kind of stuff is a huge pet peeve of mine, when authors do too much exposition, spend too much time on explaining or detailing things that don't really warrant that much text. WARNING: This Wiki contains spoilers from Patreon Chapter available on Defiance Novels. And when their names resurface, you'll have to dig your memory quite deep to find, if they ever lodged there in the first place. It's not allowed me to fully enjoy the story and after writing this review has soured my taste for this story even more. So it seems like the writing is never going to change regardless of how many people bring it up. Zac is a good guy trying to do his best in a world where might makes right and I think he succeeds for the most part. And 39.).
I can also appreciate the author wanting to break the mold of both western and eastern fantasy books of being a cookie-cutter sword user, but it's jarring compared to the grim-dark theme. We’d love your help. The story is passable, and it's not stagnant. But again, I'm no native, and my command over engrish I got mostly from western movies if not translated Japanese novels. Or even having someone else edit each chapter. Has a plot that stays consistant and believable.
I rated this story as a 3.5/5 stars, but as I wrote this review and looked more indepth in the issues I had with it, lowered it to 3/5. Then this'll do ya just fine. The story had a good start despite it being somewhat of a cliche. It's a very engaging story, has a good amount of luck woven in as all these books do, but don't deliver an overpowered main character without justifying how they achieved that. Forester's Constitution (Class): Fight in the forests, be one with nature. What I do dislike however is that unlike my original impression of the story being similar to new world and randidly ghosthound is that this is actually a xianxia story, I can see the tag is there now but I don't think it was when I started reading; what I do like however is that it's much better organized than any xianxia I've ever seen, namely that the power scaling of everyone is rather properly defined here thanks to the litrpg system, e.g. He starts human, weak and naive. Maybe not how powerful he is compared to others on the same scale, but just which scale he's on (i.e. Chpt80 But it could use some work and a good polish. TheFirstDefiance's usage of words is refreshing for me who's been stuck with Japanese MTL for months. PS: I literally dance whenever I found a story I like. You better believe there's a settlement that he wants to protect at all costs and his motivations for becoming stronger are "because I need to".
I have read over 300 litrpg books and many "system" style books. Having it in one of his hands was too unwieldy, and slowed down his progress on the meat considerably. Good world building and leveling system. This is a system that is supposed to favor the powerful, where if you are not a cultivator, you are trash. https://defiance-of-the-fall.fandom.com/wiki/Defiance_of_the_Fall_Wiki?oldid=3116. I did enjoy the story a lot, which is why I'm more disappointed as I got my hopes up. Seemingly forgotten by the System, Zac found himself stuck in the wilderness surrounded by deadly beasts. Repeatedly. The sword, the axe he's using now, the spatial bag, the armor, the clothes?
All in all a very well done survival litrpg, with some wuxia elements blended in.
There's a bunch of minor issues that just keep piling up and it's hard not to be nitpicky about it when they're so glaring. Welcome back.
If you like a decent story about a body cultivator who has to suffer to get stronger, this story is for you. First off, of course has to be the class choice. With the decreasing attention spans of humanity as a whole in our current society, it's vital for writers to adopt a similar strategy in their writing to keep the attention of readers.Update: Now I'm at chapter 278.Characters are, in line with my original impression, decent.
A classic world survival story with mediocre at everything. There's a few interesting characters spread around in the novel, and you might actually be able to feel invested in some characters (hopefully at least the protagonist), but I doubt you'll be singing the author praises for good characters. Instead, let's only talk about the prose and writing style. Some of the biggest books out this fall promise to be epics full of magic, adventure,... As Zac was alone in the middle of the forest the world changed. A myriad of people we meet via Zac through his journey turns irrelevant after they filled their roles.
Effects doubled while in a forest. (Update, now at ch 376; pacing issues have gotten worse, not enough happened in the last 100 chapters, dropped style score by half star for how ridiculously reduced the pacing has now become, but as I said earlier, the bad pacing is largely mitigated by the consistently fast chapter release rate, so the real major downside to this really is the amount of filler text, or like I said in the original review, this author should really show more and tell less, rather than listening to my advice however, he seems to have gone the opposite direction, telling more and showing less, sometimes having entire exposition dump chapters just to explain things that were already thoroughly explained in earlier exposition dumps (chapter 375 for instance)). The major reason why he can (logically speaking anyway, not sure if the author did this deliberately) still survive on earth is via security through obscurity; in other words it's because he has avoided publicizing the location of his home area, because if some parties knew where he is he'd get hunted down pretty fast. Everyone can be a bit of a wild card since their final power output depends heavily on their class and equipment and their 'daos' (a thing I really dislike in this story, the 'daos' create an undefined power scaling system within a decently defined one, tsk tsk. Seemingly forgotten by the System, Zac found himself stuck in the wilderness surrounded by deadly beasts. A universe where all races and civilzations fought for power and dominion. The faults of the story being as they may, I have to give the author credit where credit is due. Can we also get an explanation why he cant hold like 4 in each hand? Defiance of the Fall is one of the few original English LitRPG genre books to absolutely nail the formula for me.
(Thankfully, or we would have had chapter upon chapter of the protagonist doing the exact same thing). Now he's cycling energy, forming cores, and exploring the Dao with the best of them.
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